lafiera Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 this is an interior i'm working on and want any c&c that help finished great acad + max8 + vray 1.5 + pcs render time 2h 51 min, dual xeon 3.2 ghz, 2gb ram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anindia Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 very nice image, very cool and beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sterealkey Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 I agree, beautiful image. Really impressive rendertime as well. Excuse me for being the first to crit this, the 2 coffee cups on the kitchen counter look a bit 'after the fact' or too bright, as if its a vraylight material or something. But its such a tiny little detail so I wont bother changing it. Good work pal, good work. Peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 Very nice lighting and materials, I think the fruit looks a little dull, maybe add a little specularity to it, and I assume that the final render will be at higher quality levels, there is some artifacting going on there, can't wait to see it when its finished... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koper Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 agree, very nice man 2 things that bother me the first is the chair close to the camera, take it out, i think it obscures the image cause my eyes seem to get stuck with it, you want people to see the room. 2nd, dont know if this is actually the image or just the size that i viewed it at but check your anti-aliasing, all your edges are stepping other than that and what others have said, very good and it looks like a gr8 image in the making Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missoni Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 I'm sorry to critisize, but i suppose the proportions are a bit out of measure... I mean, the windowz are to low, the chairs live up to half a window, the lamp hangs almost over the table on the table surface and so forth... Besides, what i don't like is the bright stains on the ceiline... The rest looks good, especially the texturing's been done well. G'luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emraans Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 ovreall i like your imageit is good but u can improve little bit to give more realistic first hanging lights glass shold some tranparent or cloured but little reflection and your wall is dull chck with the setting of noise threshold texture is goods anyway nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChooChoo Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 I would say those are doors, not windows. Theres a deck outside. But, the deck railing looks too high. Usually around 3 feet high give or take. I would also give the crown moulding a different color, like white, off white, cream, etc. The LR chairs are fugly, but thats my opinion. I agree with the coffee cups, theres something amiss there. The scale of the fruit bowl with the bananas looks small compared to the other on the table. Cabinets look nice, same with the hardware. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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