craig.t Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 This is my second image using max and vray still trying to understand everything C & C very much welcomed to help me improve. Regards Craig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leoA4D Posted February 25, 2007 Share Posted February 25, 2007 craig.t, The modeling looks good although the soft chairs look too unused, smooth and shiny. The bump on the wall by the door might be a bit much. The scene is too dark in the foreground, with the falloff falling off too quickly (the ceiling indicates that). The bright lighting of the roomside wall of the far exterior wall, above the window, is puzzling and not life-like to me. One last comment: work on your composition. Horizontally bisect the image and you will see that almost all of the interior furnishings and accessories are haphazardly distributed around the lower half of the split image while the ceiling is foreboding and cold. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more. L. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
craig.t Posted February 26, 2007 Author Share Posted February 26, 2007 Hi leoA4D Thanks you very much for the comments, some good pointers, i was not really happy with the lighting i seem to have a problem with the vray light that i placed in the open door way reflecting in the main window, i turn the multiplier right down with resulted in a slightly darker room. Any pointers on this would be a huge help. Kindest regards Craig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffrey Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 Hi, nice render man. Just one comment. The wine glasses, something is not right about the refraction. If you used the glasses from evermotion(early version), then better reapply the material for a more convincing results. Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 looking ok so far, but crop out that expanse of ceiling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leed Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 Looks nice Craig....How are you finding Vray? It is producing great results.... I think your perspective is a bit out though.... the background image needs to be rotated a bit square to the camera. Lee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
craig.t Posted March 2, 2007 Author Share Posted March 2, 2007 Hi Lee, Not to bad, starting to finally get the hang of it i think? Thanks for the comments i'll have a look at that when i get a momment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianKitts Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 I'll second strat's comment about cropping out some of that ceiling.... also bump up the subdivision's on your main vray lights casting the illumination, it will get rid of most of the noise in the scene. if they are still on the default 8 take them up to 12. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordRaven Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 Folowing leoa4d's comment, maybe you should experiment more with the color mapping settings. From what I see I believe that you are using the old "linear color mapping". If that is the case, than you should experiment more with the bright/dark multiplier... if you chose to stick with that type of color mapping... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
craig.t Posted March 5, 2007 Author Share Posted March 5, 2007 Hi All, This is an updated version i decided to play around a bit and change a few things and tried to warm the whole scene up a bit, also taken onboard your comments Thanks again Craig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guitarboy Posted March 5, 2007 Share Posted March 5, 2007 WOW.... that looks awesome, are you able to share any of your setting for another newbie whos only just learning vray aswell...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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