WIP-Bathroom from magazine

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Hello, my name is Fábio Paiva and I´m one of Rick´s (Eloy one... ) students.

 

If anyone would like to see this imagem I got from this magazine (and also if it´s "legal" to do that) I can attach it later.

 

And I sure see some mistakes which I´ll soon fix:

- the luminaire is a bit strange. Even though it looks like the real one which is made of wood sticks and a kind of paper inside, I think mine is "clean" enough to make these sticks look like just as 3D cilinders. Maybe if a put a random noise for which one of them it will look better;

 

- for this "paper" part of the luminaire I might change it´s material for a light-yellow-skin-orange vray2sided one;

 

- I can see some edges on the washbasin as well. I´ll try to smooth that out;

 

- I still have to add about 3 more accessories on the scene to make it complete;

 

- the glossy effect on the faucet is too strong but I already fixed that.

- there´s a strange edge on the top of the faucet which I already fixed.

 

- take my name out of the washbasin.

 

 

 

Some information:

- 3dmax + vray + PS

- low render settings for test purposes only

- first image took about only 4 minutes to render

- the "zoomed" one took almost 15.

- everything was done in about 4 hours with lot´s of diff textures settings and tweaks. (hardest part for me)

 

 

 

As everyone I expect for C&C which will all be very welcome.

Hope to see things I couldn´t see before and then fix everything so I can have a nice looking final image for my future portfolio.

 

THanks!

[anindia]

great teacher-great student. & a good work.

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Thanks anindia!

[Sawyer]

It looks good what caught my eye are the chamfer lines on the sink. The reflections seem off but honestly I have a hard time finding the vocabulary to describe it. I belive the reflections should be less glossy and maybe put in a light that highlights the "product" more.

[ShaunDon]

Very nice work, man. If forced to criticize, I see two places where you could improve -- one, add some gradient to the diffuse color of your sconses so that the white isn't uniform... there's always a hot spot and some falloff from whatever is illuminating it. And in the close-up shot, I think you've got a little too much blur on your chrome reflections.

 

But it's great work -- it's always a trap, the better your work gets, the more painfully minute the criticisms you'll receive. But it's all in the pursuit of getting better so I try not to let anyone offend me. ;-)

 

Shaun

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@ Sawyer,

Thank you very much. You right, I´m gonna try to fix the reflections of the sink and do something with the ligthting also.

 

 

@ ShaunDon,

Yeah, as I said I didn´t really liked the sconces and maybe this "gradient" change will improve it a lot. About the chrome glossines I already fixed that, so in the next image It will look better too.

Thanks for your time!

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Well...

I changed somethings...

Once again, thank you all very much...

 

I still have to make it a "real render" with high settings and model some little objects...

[ShaunDon]

Two thumbs up, all very good changes. Well done!

 

Shaun

[Ricardo Eloy]

I second Shaun on this, Fabio! As I told you yesterday on class, using a VRayLight plane instead of the IES really worked. Congrats!

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@Eloy,

The vraylight was just a perfect idea for that light.

 

 

And thank you all very much for the C&C...I´m very glad for the help. It´s very important for me.

And once I really finish this image I´ll post it here.

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Here it is the picture I´m based on.