t.fzr Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 First test render + some PS Some parts still need some attention... C&C are very much welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jophus14 Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 It looks as though there is a motion blur on your image. Maybe it's just the materials that you are using. Nice start. What else do you plan on doing to the image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tucoVB Posted March 8, 2007 Share Posted March 8, 2007 Very nice light, materials are good too. maybe too mutch blured, but it's nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
t.fzr Posted March 8, 2007 Author Share Posted March 8, 2007 Thx for the comments, Indeed I guess that the blurred motion feeling comes from the materials I use I still have to make some changes in de design, the floor of the patio needs a kind of pattern of concrete, grass and stones. Besides that I have to correct some modelling/texturing details T.gsxr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poll Posted March 11, 2007 Share Posted March 11, 2007 Nice work! I especially like the right side of the image.Very good glass too! Crit would be the beam in the middle of the windows. The further it goes to the end, the more it looks like aan 'cartoon' render. Maybe it is outlining causing this? How did you do the perforated steel? I really like how that turned out. The metal below actually looks a little tiled to me. Love it! keep us posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
t.fzr Posted March 12, 2007 Author Share Posted March 12, 2007 Thx Poll, The beam in de middle on the right side has to be a lot smaller actually so maybe that will change something ... The perforated steel is just a steel material with an opacity map on it, the holes will be smaller too on the next update (clients request) Back to work now t.gsxr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alfienoakes Posted March 12, 2007 Share Posted March 12, 2007 Nice look to it.. I think that the reason it looks "blurred" is because your shadows are..! They are too soft fo that image. The sun woul dbe casting harder shadows than that. The edges are too diffuse IMO. But good start thou.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
t.fzr Posted March 14, 2007 Author Share Posted March 14, 2007 updated render C&C welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted March 14, 2007 Share Posted March 14, 2007 Displacement on the stones will look sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest nazcaLine Posted March 14, 2007 Share Posted March 14, 2007 looks good. i think you can improve he glass on the left building. less opacity and more reflection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
t.fzr Posted March 15, 2007 Author Share Posted March 15, 2007 Thx for the comments!! In fact there is a displacement map on those stones but maybe I can make that better ... I will try I made a second view from the other Patio in the building ... C&C please t.gsxr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted March 15, 2007 Share Posted March 15, 2007 Not too copnvinced by the shadows on this one. If the sun was bright enough too wash out the concrete on the floor and the sky luminence is enough to make blue tinted shadows, I think the shadows would be on the sharper side of blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Hunt Posted March 16, 2007 Share Posted March 16, 2007 The glass is too milky and needto be darker. Look great JHV Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alfienoakes Posted March 16, 2007 Share Posted March 16, 2007 Not too copnvinced by the shadows on this one. If the sun was bright enough too wash out the concrete on the floor and the sky luminence is enough to make blue tinted shadows, I think the shadows would be on the sharper side of blurry. I still agree with that.. The sun would not lose intensity that quickly in that image.. Smaller items like leaves / foliage would cast the soft shadows, but the edge of the roof / wall would dbe much harder than that.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
t.fzr Posted March 23, 2007 Author Share Posted March 23, 2007 Hey, Here are my last updates on the images. C&C are always welcome t.gsxr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alfienoakes Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 Shadows look better.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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