bathroom rendering, need advice

[jafs00]

the client comes in tommorrow, I think the work is pretty much acceptable, but something still seems a bit off to me, I can't quite put my finger on it, maybe you guys can help me out...

 

[Tommy L]

The direct light needs to be much stronger. Ithis will brighten the scene and give more contrast. Looks a bit grey right now.

[blade911]

same as above.. also change ur background to somethin morningish or brighter

also not sure if ur tryin a night scene so maybe switchin off the direct light n puttin a dark bg will help

[cdgsean]

It seems a little underlit as already mentioned. The background in the window doesn't match the lighting either. Maybe try putting some kind of window treatment shown in the closed position...that way you don't have to worry about the outside. That background image isn't contributing to the scene as it is.

[jafs00]

thanks for the advice guys, the windows are supposed to be dark tinted glass, so I guess the outside pic comes of darker than it should, I'l try to fix that up in post processing, I'm trying out a brighter lighting solution, I'll post it later.

[tecsun]

IMO A good image should able to tell people what is the time in the image. So you can try to make it more noticeable whether it is a night scene or day scene or maybe evening. Anyway, it doesn't mean your render looks bad, it looks quite good but just need some tweak to make it better.

[Zeilveen]

First impression, hey thats not bad!

 

things that notice me,

- all colours except for shampoo bottle are grey, maybe try a B/W for fun, but add some more colour contrast with your sun or towels.

- background image can look nicer

- your viewpoint is my height (2.01m) I dont often see an image in that area, try playing with the camera abit and see what happens (maybe try DOF on the sink looking towards the window)

 

Looking good!