villa complex

[blade911]

hey everyone

 

this here is a project im workin on here in muscat, oman. they are twin residential units.

 

do give in ur c&c

 

cheers

[F J]

very nice!

i like it!

[alfienoakes]

I think your ambient light is very good, really looks convincing in the shadowed areas.. the back ground looks like it stops short of the horizon thou.. something looks off there..

 

Also, your brickwork appears to be reflecting the environmet..? is this correct..? maybe you are using shiney bricks..

 

Person in the foreground looks a little to rigid and off scale in some way. The road texture looks a little too large in scale.. you can see big chunks of aggregate etc.. and the small paved islands could do with a kerb or edge to them..

 

But, having said that, it looks a good image..

 

Not sure about the "victorian england" lights..

[D-Holme]

Kripal

* You might want to look at moving your light source so that the shadows are not falling directly across the street, it makes it look narrow and the buildings looming.

* Although it is more of a personal preference the horizon seems a little high.

* Some of the textures could be stronger, notably the brick parking areas and the raised curbs could do with a better bump map.

 

Interesting design though, I think it will look good all brought together - good luck with it.

[blade911]

thanks u guys.

 

theres actually a retaining wall at the far end of the site to block off some high terrain . so tats not the horizon.. n yeah the bricks are infact marble cladded ones available here...

 

the people are at a height of 175cm so shud be right i guess.

 

shall work on the kerb n ashpahlt texture.

 

cheers