vgalov Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 Hi all, This is the last exterior, I've been working lately. Rendered C4D, modeled ArchiCAD. Please comment. Thanks in advance! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
graphix Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 Very nice looking rendering! Only thing that bothers me are the cars....they dont seem to be lined up correctly, the one closest to the foreground looks crooked, the jag looks like it taking off at mach 3, the camero looks like it is getting ready to jump the curb, and the mercedes looks like it is riding high. One other tidbit....I think your people are a slight bit too tall. Did I mention I LOVE the buildings? graphix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jucaro Posted January 21, 2004 Share Posted January 21, 2004 The sky background texture looks like it was rotated 90 deg. and then it was non-uniformly resized to fir the resolution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vgalov Posted January 22, 2004 Author Share Posted January 22, 2004 Thanks, I will check one more time the cars and the people, though I tried to line them with the perspective. The blue one is definitely flying. The one in the middle IMHO brings dynamics to the image. The sky is really stretched a little, but not rotated. I’ll change it in PS. Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gander0 Posted January 22, 2004 Share Posted January 22, 2004 Hi Vgalov! Nice image. How about some bump mapping to the building on the left the blocks look very flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vgalov Posted January 22, 2004 Author Share Posted January 22, 2004 Thanks, The building on the left starts to look very busy with the bump and the client decided to "pale" it a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vgalov Posted January 26, 2004 Author Share Posted January 26, 2004 Things changed a little from last week. The client wants a night shot of the building. This is my first try. Thanks Viktor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Nelson Posted January 26, 2004 Share Posted January 26, 2004 That is RAD! So much better than the first. Good job man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vgalov Posted January 27, 2004 Author Share Posted January 27, 2004 Latest update with some PS work Thanks in advance, Viktor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josh1587140445 Posted January 28, 2004 Share Posted January 28, 2004 That looks great!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
graphix Posted January 28, 2004 Share Posted January 28, 2004 Very well done. I love the overall effect and that slight shine of the breaking sun. one comment though I think the shine on the street is too consistant.....since it is not raining in the scene the reflections should be broken up alot more, but thats just me. graphix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vgalov Posted January 31, 2004 Author Share Posted January 31, 2004 Thanks for the comments, but the client ( orangemad ) is still not happy orangeno with the final result. I will keep you posted if things dramatically change. Thanks one more time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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