[wip] mall

[dave davidson]

http://www.subwayz.net/upload/13.jpg

more to come

all made in cinema 4d xl v7.3

watch out for more of the same

[dave davidson]

for those that cant click

[STRAT]

dave!!!! nice to see you m8.

 

i always love seeing ur work! i see it be posted in the cinema 4d forum too. why not go there and post up some cinema tips for us. i know your knowlege on the subject outweighs all the books ever made on the subject:)

 

nice wip so far, just 1 main comment at the mo -

 

personally not struck on all that brown stuff, and it tiles somewat.

[dave davidson]

thanks m8

i will sort out tiling

i think

 

more to follow

[nisus]

Hi dave,

 

just three things slipped my mind:

 

- get rid of the tiling in the ceiling

- the black lines in the floor - I don't know the english word for it - should be a bit smaller

- crop your image (keep the upper part) [you don't need that much tiles on the floor and

your horizon won't be at the middle of you image anymore]

 

love to see more

 

nisus

[nisus]

Hi dave,

 

something strange happened I guess... I was not commenting on the coffee of course...

 

nisus

[dave davidson]

note to self : name files in relation to projects and not just numbers

sorry ppl