dining hall project

[Lief Schindler]

please crit...Thanks in advance.

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=okenshields.jpg

[Craig Ramsay]

Good start, looks like it has been modeled well.

 

There seems to be some artifacts on the floor... I can't tell why that has happened could be your texture map?

 

Try adding in some tables, chairs, people etc to make the place look busy and take some time to work on the lighting a bit more. The lights on the ceiling seem to be very bright and are washing out your textures.

 

Maybe also try to position your ceiling tiles the way they would actually be, at the moment they look like they are running under the timber.

 

Sorry about all the comments but you asked for a crit

 

Look forward to seeing an update

 

Craig

[supaslims]

Definitely a step forward from your laboratory renders..not so washed out and a clearer sense of space IMHO.

 

apart from whats already mentioned, some of the lights in the back of the room....they have no source.

[Jefferson Grigsby]

Something in the composition seems odd. Is your camera horizotal, or looking up or down? The image makes me want to twist my head to the side, which is distracting.

[Lief Schindler]

Here are the updated images....

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=view1_4.jpg

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=view2_1.jpg

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=view3.jpg

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=view4.jpg