evening view of housing scheme

[stormchaser]

hi folks, i recently posted aerial view of a housing, this view is of the same housing, i tried to create an evening view around sunset. there are few things to be fixed that i can see myself. (palm is a bit out of proportion) and few streetlights need to be added. need pair of fresh eyes to look into it and give me some ideas.

thanks in advance .

[kippu]

.imho , i am finding the camera angle looking in vain towards something without any purpose and i would probably make the windows darker and not yellowish ...

 

post your updates... nice lights

[Tommy L]

Potentiallyu a nice peice of work. Theres not many clients that ask for a dusk shot, so youre lucky. You could move the camera closer to the water to take advantage of using reflections. Id probably try to get a closer shot and use perspective to add depth to the render.

[stormchaser]

.imho , i am finding the camera angle looking in vain towards something without any purpose and i would probably make the windows darker and not yellowish ...

 

post your updates... nice lights

 

thanks for the comment kippu, i know what you mean that the camera angle sorta looking in vain towards nothingness. i wanted to create a nostalgic evening feeling in the scene, distant birds flying in the sky, tired ppl coming back home from work, kids finished playing and their mothers asking them to go back home. but as architectural visualization it doesnt highlight any building structure so i think ill drop the plan and redo the scene with better camera placement.

 

Potentiallyu a nice peice of work. Theres not many clients that ask for a dusk shot, so youre lucky. You could move the camera closer to the water to take advantage of using reflections. Id probably try to get a closer shot and use perspective to add depth to the render.

thanks for the comment tom. youre right not many clients asking for dusk shot, looks like mine is changing his mind to night shot too, as for perspective youre right it needs more perspective , not only just for depth but to give good height to the structures too but client thinks that even now its too much perspective and i should go for less.

[Tommy L]

Oh, and you should correct the verticals (camera correction). This may ease the clients worries about the perspective