choochee Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 not finished yet....almost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 I think the glass looks like its tinted, it affects the background colour too much. Theres something i dont like about the composition. Maybe theres too much space between the viewer and the living area, you seem a bit stranded. The floor tiles are lovely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SandmanNinja Posted April 17, 2007 Share Posted April 17, 2007 I've seen a beach house that has extraordinarily thick glass and they were tinted, as the house faced the ocean and the sunrises were particularly breath-taking. The owner went on and on as to how much just the glass cost him. More than my car.... sigh I really like this render - looks very, very impressive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted April 17, 2007 Share Posted April 17, 2007 Yeah I know what you mean, ive got a pair of sunglasses that make the whole world look amazing (kind of brownish purplish pink). I should find out what the coating is and get chaos to code a 'Tom's sunnies filter' for vray Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlytE Posted April 17, 2007 Share Posted April 17, 2007 I think theres maybe slightly too much DOF, leading it to look like a photo of a model of a living room, rather than a photo of a living room. Also, the seating area seems crammed, especially the way the chairs butt up against the television. Overall nice image though I like it - good ambience Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted April 17, 2007 Share Posted April 17, 2007 I think theres maybe slightly too much DOF, leading it to look like a photo of a model of a living room, rather than a photo of a living room. Also, the seating area seems crammed, especially the way the chairs butt up against the television. Overall nice image though I like it - good ambience I agree, wouldnt it make sense to swap the dining and livings areas positions? Then the living area could spread a little and the dining area would be more formalized. There is a lot of unused space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
choochee Posted April 18, 2007 Author Share Posted April 18, 2007 thanx all.... the design is by one of the most honorable desginers here so all I have to do is compose his orders toe a complete render.... I agree about the spot on the right (already fixed) and the DOF.... well I like it so I leave it (but I know it may be too much). so here's another view (draft still) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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