mmahan Posted March 5, 2003 Share Posted March 5, 2003 I have been working on this rendering for about two days now and I would welcome some constructive criticism in order to bring it up to the next level. I have included the original image used for the camera match in addition to the rendering. The images can be found at http://www.s-vs.com/render/grand/ Thanks in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nisus Posted March 5, 2003 Share Posted March 5, 2003 Hi mmahan, The cameramatch looks fine on first site (good camera match), but the lighting can be enhanced. First of all, I don't see any shadows from the poles casting onto the new building. Maybe you didn't want to add these, but it can give some additional realism and depth. Second, the light interior catched my attention. As you can see from the neighbours in the pictures, the interiors should be a lot darker. Third, add reflections to your glass panels... It's only a quick critic, but I hope you find it useful for now. rgds nisus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Miranda Posted March 5, 2003 Share Posted March 5, 2003 Hi, Nice camera match as nisus has said. But, please get rid of that sky.jpg...A nice custom photorealistic sky would be so much better. Keep us posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dollus Posted March 7, 2003 Share Posted March 7, 2003 In addition to the above comments, desaturate the rendered portion of the image some. That orange would not look that way after a year in the sun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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