OFFICE BUILDING

[Mike_VIZ]

This is my first test.

done in 8hrs.(model and render)

let me know your comments to improve this work.

Autocad 2000, LVS, PS.

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=acceso-2.jpg

[Francois]

Hi. The lighting seem very realistic. Simple but believable. The concrete has a slight red-purple in it. Maybe desaturate it a bit, and maybe try to dirty it. Besides that nothing to say. Good work.

 

Francois

[bigcahunak]

Overall its a great looking image, but... since it is a WIP section then here are a few small ones:

• The concrete edges are too sharp. There is no sharp 90 degree edge in real wourld. If you happen to go back to the model stage (the disadvantage of working with LS, or just a different modeler/renderer programs) try to chamfer/fillet those sharp edges a little.
• The closer trees' trunk should be shaded on his right side (The darker sode of the moon)
• The tree in the back is a flipped image of the front one. While there is not much wrong with that, you still need to work on its colors, e.g: no shadows on its trunk, like the front one, but rather just darker.

BTW: I was never able to get such a well lit external images scene in LS. Can you share your settings to recieve those results.

Thanks, and good luck.