Brooklyn Apartment (Comments welcome)

[parker2740]

I dont know if the dreamy effect is better than a sahrp look. Any opinions?

[Tommy L]

I think the bloom (dreamy effect) is too strong and needs to be localized in the image to where the lighting is the sttrongest. Otherwose, it just looks like youve blurred a perfecly good image in photoshop! post the pure renders so we can have a proper look.

[parker2740]

Better?

[Tommy L]

As a finished image, i would probably use the screen layer as you have in the blurred shot, but without the blur. I think this will brighten and help with contrast. You need to deal with the noise in the image though, and maybe something a bit more interesting happening outside?

Nice work.

[Koper]

I like your composition of the bedroom, both the paintings on the walls keep the eye from going out of the picture

 

i agree, the dreamy effect is a bit much, not the effect it self but the effect over the whole image. maybe put some curtains in the shot?

[Ghan]

There's something fuzzy/blurry going on in the windows. Can't put my finger on it though. Looks like it's radiating or something.

The second time you posted it with less dreamy effect looks good. But still....the windows......what could it be......

 

Greetz

Ghan

http://www.alles3d.nl

[Horhe]

The window glass is too thick. Extrude it at a lower value.