Pavilion

[Renderman]

Hi all. This is a project I started a while back but had to put on the back burner. It is rendered with fakeosity. I wanted to get your comments as to how I can improve both the model and the image. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Juan

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=SE_Pavilion.jpg

[bloomlun]

I think there are some flat and some over saturated areas in the picture

 

1. note the greenish sky where the sky connects to the grey building

 

2. the road and the sidewalk that's close to the viewer are too flat, it could help if there was a a shadow there or an object that is close to the viewer and is half out of the frame

 

3. did you try a lower camera, kind of a passenger eye level?

 

besides these things I think the picture it good

 

congrads