pnhatton Posted May 15, 2007 Share Posted May 15, 2007 I am currently working on a nice house in the country. I need to work on the grass etc and a few other things. Please feel free to let me know your comments on what i could improve etc. Check it out here: http://www.sharecg.com/view.php?upload_id=3430 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trino Posted May 15, 2007 Share Posted May 15, 2007 maybe if you increase the sun ligh you will get a more define form, it seems like is a cloudy day but you can see the flowers shadow, the grass is to big at glance, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3dSol Posted May 28, 2007 Share Posted May 28, 2007 hi looking awesome it seems to me that the roof could use some kind of relief (bump, displacement), its a little flat good luck! 3dS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fairlane62 Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 Looking very reallistic, keep up the good work. Other than what has been said allready. The mapping of the wall adjacent to the french doors looks different than the rest of the building. In my opinion, maybe increasing the sun intensity and having some shadows cast onto the building itself from say a tree would really make the composition a little more interesting. Joel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 A little displacement on the bricks wouldnt hurt... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nic H Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 Hmm i wouldnt be calling it "An amazingly realistic house" just yet;) Lke the others said it needs some more contrast in the lighting and the textures look a bit blurry. make some displacement maps and do something about the grass in the foreground, it looks a bit repetitive. Good start though, it has a 'in game' feel. O.T EDIT ahhh I was wondering why you didnt put the images into the post, sharecg generates profit per view split 50/50 between the site and you based on advertising. Not a bad idea! http://www.shareCG.com read teh faq, looks like a good idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pnhatton Posted June 2, 2007 Author Share Posted June 2, 2007 yeah i upload all my work to sharecg. i discovered it in the 3D World magazine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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