Wip

[Sawyer]

I am almost done but I would like a round of comments before I sign off. I need to rework a few things like the bg wall and add some more trees. I need to have it wrapped up by this eve.

 

Thanks

[Chad Warner]

That's pretty freakin nice!! What is the big blue thing in the middle?

[Sawyer]

Thanks Chad - the glass thing is a movable roof on tracks. It covers a spa room. The walls on both sides of the spa are glass pocket doors that "dissapear" into the side wall so in theory the whole room opens up. I have posted old images in the past using this plan.

[Msamir]

I agree with Chad thats VERY nice but that movable roof is too distracting.

[AFK_Matrix]

I don't know if is just me but when i first opened the image it looked out of scale? To me it looks like a toy house, I dont mean to be rude mate, the modeling etc and landscaping look awesome. Maybe put a person in there so it give a better idea of scale, or move the camera position. As I say it maybe just me.

[Sawyer]

I don't know if is just me but when i first opened the image it looked out of scale?

 

Thanks for that feedback. The angle is a bit odd and flattens some of the depth on theforeground. I will keep an eye on the scale. Do other people see a scale issue?

 

I know the roof is distracting. I don't know what to say about it. Yup.

[Justin Hunt]

I see the scale issues as well, I think its the trees in the distance and the size of the flowers. The sand needs to be finer as well.

 

Possible desaturate the blue on the sliding roof.

 

I like where this is going

 

JHV

[trino]

I think the scale issue can be because of the camera angle or the front plants, they look to big compare to windows. The composition after all is great, love the ground and the sky fits perfectly.

[rpompeu]

I agree with th others, beutifull imeg but if you change th POV it would be better

[Tommy L]

I like the image, but there is something weird about it, it does look real, but like a real model. Like a thunderbirds scene...