blade911 Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 proposal for a glass art museum - nite view work in progress do give in ur comments guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koper Posted May 25, 2007 Share Posted May 25, 2007 good starting point! ok i am gonna point out just a couple of areas for improvement The first would be that the composition don't work at all, you should move building off-centre, there is now eneregy when its smack in the middle. This point is also part of the design phase for the image So lets get onto the 3d part Your concrete texture in the foreground seems to stretch and pixelate, this is a very hard thing to do right as textures start tiling but with practice you'll get there. Maybe you want to also re-check your glass, now it looks a bit like plastic Your lighting is good but can be moore dramatic, To me, your water and trees ect looks good cool, hope it helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nangkri Posted May 25, 2007 Share Posted May 25, 2007 yes agree with Koper, and the envi need to be re touch... keep on rolling bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blade911 Posted May 25, 2007 Author Share Posted May 25, 2007 thanks guys. yeah im stil honin my composition skills so shall work on tat. n tat environment blurrin was a rush job in time for a presentation so treated it kinda wrong. im also addin an interior of a typical floor. still lots more to add in thr cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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