Residential building

[jasonio]

This was modelled in Softimage XSI 6 and rendered with Mental Ray.

 

Just hoping for a few comments/opinions to help me polish it off.

 

Cheers in advance.

[trino]

i really like the gradient sky, the image is looking good, keep it up.

[Exellite]

you have obvious tiling problems in your textures, but apart from that it's looking good, nice amount of reflection in your glass.

[Tommy L]

Maybe straighten the verticals a little (camera correction modifier). The 3rd perspective is quite extreme.

[Fairlane62]

Looking good, has the potential of becoming a great image, keep it up.

[3dSol]

hi

looking very nice!

have you tried (is it possible by location) to make the shadows go from right to left?, might be interesting

 

3dS

[Onzki]

nice one.. it looks realistic:) on my opinion;my only comment would be on material you assigned to the low concrete fence/divider. can you randomize the pattern a litle bit to lessen obvious pattern repetition.. or use other material if possible. At my first glance--it resembled a "pixelized" pattern. well,maybe it's just my eyes=) Nice work again dude..

[alfienoakes]

As mentioned before, materials are tiling on some prominent areas, the glass looks good, and the sky gradient works well...

 

I would raise the camera a touch.. it looks way to far down, which isnt helping the camera correction. The foreground looks very bear.. needs some context to it.. bit more life.. But it is a WIP I suppose so maybe thats still to come..

 

The lighting looks good.. works well. But there is something strange going on with the reflections in the first floor windows.. it looks like its the top edge of a background plain.. It sticks out a bit.

 

Maybe try a bit of camera correction as well.. Set it up, then maybe play with the settings. I think some times its nice to have the images with a little distortion on taller shots.. but not too much.

 

Andy