mskin Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 CC please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rpompeu Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Hi Herbert, Nice image. A few comments, there is a transparent issue in the glasses when 2 or more are aligned. Maybe you could put some colors on the table, all white is a bit confusing. You could use a sky with some clouds or with a stronger gradient. Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
batteryoperatedlettuce Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Wonderful detail... I'm not loving the highly saturated greens of those plants, but that's just my taste. Also I think the people in the background could be given weaker contrast IMHO as they seem to jump into the forground too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 nice image on the whole. couple of immediate outstandings though - * plates and table tops too bright and over-exposed. cant make out the detail * shadows too sharp, especially under the tables. they should be areas or more diffused for the lighting involved. * and as mentioned, the plants are too green. this is a nice image, but how about a real strong shaft of sunlight streaming in from the glass wall? could make the room with all its shadowing look most dramatic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chiquito Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Adding some direct light/shadows through the courtain wall? could that add some complexity to the image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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