ebad Posted June 8, 2007 Share Posted June 8, 2007 Hi all.. I'm back again with a new work! What do you say? C&C are welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exellite Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 the lightings quite nice but you need more variation and better scaling of your wood texture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trino Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 since it is a WIP i would say that with a nice background you can make a good scene, the lighting is good but as metioned you need to put some variation to the wood texture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
batteryoperatedlettuce Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 and some things on the shelves please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ebad Posted June 12, 2007 Author Share Posted June 12, 2007 I agree about the wood texture.. hum.. I've changed it but not good for me yet!! and some quick details added to the scene! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted June 12, 2007 Share Posted June 12, 2007 I liked the color of the wood the first pass. It's looking good though! Where does everyone get their accessories? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ky Lane Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 The cupboards going through the cornice work looks odd. Very pretty otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kris McIsaac Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 What about a splash back behind the sink? Layout is better now, was a bit cramped in the firt one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spooner04 Posted June 13, 2007 Share Posted June 13, 2007 In addition to the comments about the Crown molding and the back splash I would also rework the baseboard and pull the windows down from the cabinets a bit, they look like they go up behind them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ebad Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share Posted June 17, 2007 Wood texture was changed again, I like this one more. Windows was came down;) thanks Spooner04! What do you say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spooner04 Posted June 18, 2007 Share Posted June 18, 2007 Definitely an improvement. I don't see much adjustment in the window height under the cabinets. I would give it at least 5cm (2in) space if not more between the bottom of the cabinets and the top of the window opening. I like the changes you've made, it seems a bit dark maybe. But you've added some details that are very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ebad Posted June 18, 2007 Author Share Posted June 18, 2007 Definitely an improvement. I don't see much adjustment in the window height under the cabinets. I would give it at least 5cm (2in) space if not more between the bottom of the cabinets and the top of the window opening. I like the changes you've made, it seems a bit dark maybe. But you've added some details that are very nice. Thanks dear Jeremiah, now when i see your comment my new render was finished after ~9h Maybe one reason for staying a part of windows behind the cabinets is that I wanted to have maximum volume of light into the kitchen! but your right,I see your right! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ebad Posted June 18, 2007 Author Share Posted June 18, 2007 Ok! ~9h for this one!! The render resolution was 1200 * 900, What do you think about the Render time and image quality? and any other comment please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vince Paske Posted June 18, 2007 Share Posted June 18, 2007 I think it looks really nice, the elements on the counter-tops and cabinents are nice touches and look great. The wood is nicely mapped too, good job. It's a little dim in the kitchen though, try lighting up the pendant fixture to throw some light around in that space. Although its a relatively small image, the painfully long render time come from all those gorgeous glossy reflections you have. Not knowing what kind of hardware you have, or any of your scene settings, I don't know what to say except to throw more hardware at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ebad Posted June 18, 2007 Author Share Posted June 18, 2007 I think it looks really nice, the elements on the counter-tops and cabinents are nice touches and look great. The wood is nicely mapped too, good job. It's a little dim in the kitchen though, try lighting up the pendant fixture to throw some light around in that space. Although its a relatively small image, the painfully long render time come from all those gorgeous glossy reflections you have. Not knowing what kind of hardware you have, or any of your scene settings, I don't know what to say except to throw more hardware at it Thanks alot dear Vince. Lighting up the pendant fixture is a nice idea! I agree with you about render time, Most of that was spend on glass reflections, My render settings was not high, and my hardware.. hum.. I dont know! (CPU: AMD 3000+ sempron) (512MB of RAM) I think its not a good one.hum? Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spooner04 Posted June 20, 2007 Share Posted June 20, 2007 I would also raise the cabinets so they touch the ceiling, and maybe raise the pendant and move it more to the center. it looks like someone might hit their head or it it with the cabinet doors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ebad Posted June 29, 2007 Author Share Posted June 29, 2007 Thanks, Here I've modified something.. How's? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iain Denby Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 What an odd kitchen. Wall units are usually about 450 -500mm above the worktop. Yours look nearer 900mm! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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