my second job

[fionaba]

Lets hear those comments and critics

[fionaba]

top view of first floor

[fionaba]

another one done some time ago.

[Fairlane62]

What kind of software are you using?

I think the house needs more work on the texturing(mapping) and lighting. I also think that the proportions of the image make the house look more boxy than it actually is.

 

Hope this helps.

Joel

[Tommy L]

Theres a scary man at the door.....

[fionaba]

Carrara 4 pro, learning yet the lighting part.

[fionaba]

Here is a new render of the front. Better?

[Tommy L]

Your shadows are all going in different directions. How are you doing the lighting?

[trino]

try to use a real camera angle, the sky is over saturated with the blue color, and some shader reflect too much.

[fionaba]

uupps you are right. Im using three ligths and a sun light. forgot to turn shadows off on the lights. As I said Im new to setting lights, the sky is postwork in photoshop. Dont like to use the Carrara skies. Maybe because I dont know how to use them yet. Thank you for the critics. I really apreciate them is the only way to learn.