Kitchen

[CookiE]

This is my first 3d render I have been contracted to do, just wondering what you guys thought.

I realise its no where near the level of most people so any tips or criticism are welcome.

http://www.jmad.co.nz/kea1.jpg

http://www.jmad.co.nz/kea2.jpg

 

 

Caleb

[Fran]

I think it's pretty good Caleb. The camera view in the first image is a bit awkward. That's all I can think of to crit.

[sterealkey]

yeah nice images Caleb. good going.

 

In the second image it seems like your ceiling is not quite meeting the walls, so its throwing nasty darkness in that groove. I would also maybe look at getting a collection of more realistic plants as this one doesnt look very happy. That door to the left of the kitchen, is that like a pantry or cupboard or something?

 

Congrats on executing your first job successfully.

 

Cheers

[CookiE]

Yeah that little door is a cubbard, small place so there not much room for stuff.

I also have to put a washing cubbard in the lounge now (not my design)

But thats for giving me good comments makes me feel a bit better about my work.

I have been looking into getting more real plants any plugins or anything you would reconmend?

[sterealkey]

If render time is not an issue to you then I'd recommend Evermotion's archmodels. They have the best tree collections Ive seen...ever.

[CookiE]

Ok cool, i go to the site from time to time ill have a look for them