Residential

[Andy Park]

Hi All,

 

This is my first post, I'm not an architect and i've not had any training at this. I'm trying to change my job from a really crappy one to a visualiser. I would love for some help here.

 

The building is not my design I just made the model. please give me any help you can to improve this. I know my background image is a bit naff but I don't know what else to do with it?

 

any help??

[chutti]

good job!! this is a good image....few things to change...Brighten up the grass a little cause the sun light is missing on them..the tree over the grass (i dont like this tree sorry) is'nt casting any shadow. roof tilling on the four corners of the house is way too big... the background trees are kinda low-res come on man get a camera take some tree line photos. England is a beautiful country . a nice car could make the image more rich.....good luck.

[D.B.]

This could be a nice render...even with your background. :-) Try removing the concical shaped shrub that blocks visual access to the front entrance, and make the indirect lighting on this building more consistant...(this is scan line?)..In reality the trim and drive would probably be brighter, and like Chutti said be consistant with scale of your roof tiles..... Keep at it, this is a good start!

[Andy Park]

This is actually a mental ray render, used daylight system, that is the only light. i'll re-do with fixed tile scal and try to brighten up the drive and trim, not sure how to brighten the trim though as it's material is white already.

 

i'll repost once done.