iduna79 Posted July 29, 2007 Share Posted July 29, 2007 Maya/mental ray and photoshop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wodewil Posted July 29, 2007 Share Posted July 29, 2007 Quite nice try to find Your own way to illustrate Arch ... IMO - but I feel something disturbing with those field of depth... its messing with scale and is not helping us- watchers- to feel the depth ... and there is something weird with reflections in table stool and glasses : its look like there is no walls behind cameras... It is notticed when it isn't but if You do it no one see it! That is my main rules when I'm modeling scene. Wery nice colours and desaturate those cyan details might to impoove Your art. very good materials, only vine can be a liitle more reflective and refractive. I like Your image Just one thought.. at the end... if threr wern't those firs chair it could be nice story that we see what someone at the tablle would see... just thought Keep posting See You later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tayrona Posted July 29, 2007 Share Posted July 29, 2007 I like the global composition, pov, and stage but I think the stuff on the table look very "posed" would be better less perfection in position of things. The image at backgroud is not convincing.... look too close to be so blurred... and the tile in the back (black and white) it does not look real, maybe scale, maybe blur effect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3dSol Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 looking good! the black objects are too black cant tell what material they are made of, need to reflect a bit i think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
annalea Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 i think almost all of the elemts in the scene are out of scale. all seems to look unproportionate. and the "focus" thing looks like a drunk man had just woke up and saw this scene on his dinning table. its making me dizzy. Also add some reflections to the black elements in the table which are supposed to be reflecting. Unless you have used a material on those element that is non-reflective. but i think i little reflection would add up some life on the scene. and also the glasses and tera cups i think are too colored. does not blend with the whole theme. But to end of it all youve got something good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iduna79 Posted August 5, 2007 Author Share Posted August 5, 2007 Interesting feedback. Thanks. I made some changes to the scene and updated the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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