DaveP Posted August 2, 2007 Share Posted August 2, 2007 Dear all, I have created some interior visuals, using Vray, i have now started to create exterior ones. Please send back any useful comments or enhancements. many thanks David Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andy Park Posted August 2, 2007 Share Posted August 2, 2007 Nice Image, can only see one thing that bugs me and that the repeated pattern on the drive. Other than that lovely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mooney102 Posted August 2, 2007 Share Posted August 2, 2007 The scale of the people seems to be a bit off. As said already, the material on the driveway could use some work. Besides that it looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianKitts Posted August 2, 2007 Share Posted August 2, 2007 The foreground plants don't do anything for you compositionally that and they are either in the middle of the road, or the house is on a really narrow street. First thing I looked at when the image opened is the big plant centered in the middle.... not the house Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted August 2, 2007 Share Posted August 2, 2007 Lookin good! CC: People too tall and work on the materials to get a little more texture and variety. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hughie Posted August 2, 2007 Share Posted August 2, 2007 Looking good I'm with BKittsARC on this, the foreground plant draws my eye into it, shift it at least a half of its width to the right and down a little. You could consider cropping the image off just above where the curb meets the edge and nearly the same height along the top. It will strengthen your composition. Also are the there no curbs in this development? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr. a Posted August 2, 2007 Share Posted August 2, 2007 scale peole down and add a shadow to te ground beneath them... remove foreground plants and crop image to see less street in the foreground blur the tree in the upper left corner nice work otherwise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3dSol Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 looking very good, the shingles on the porch roof are a bit too big and the joining of the grass and the sidewalk needs a little bit of work good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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