mcbridecasey Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 I modeled and rendered this image using Maya 8.5 for a client. I would like some feedback on how I could improve the overall image. Comment on anything you like. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trino Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 where is the image ?, can`t see anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Another one of those minimalism images. Theyre becoming quite passe in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcbridecasey Posted August 9, 2007 Author Share Posted August 9, 2007 sorry about that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJLynn Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Want to try one more time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcbridecasey Posted August 9, 2007 Author Share Posted August 9, 2007 Ok this is it i promise! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RTurner Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 What does your client want the image to say, right now it seems to be trying to say alot......mabey several more intimate shots would work better that one overall shot, its alot to take in at once. I realize its a small space but you have a bit of kitchen, living, dining, family, and patio all crammed into one shot. Its hard for the viewer to inhabit the image... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fran Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 There are a lot of black masses in the scene that make the composition a little hard to discern. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlytE Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 Alot of colour bleeding... and for me the lighting conflicts quite heavily. How much post work did you do on this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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