popescusro Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 Hi everybody. After one night in the office drinking coffee an "playing" with this building it seems like impossibile for me to finish it. My brain needs a pause so i will wait for your comments and advice. Thank you very much and i'll go to sleep a little bit (the rendering is done with 3dmax8, no postwork) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jonblaze Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 image says exterior swimming pool...where is the pool?...guess you could address the composition a bit, I'm not really sure what the focal point is. Materials could do with a bit more work, cant really make out what each element is supposed to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dobrikovic Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 I like model/architecture. It's got potential. I would change background sky, it's a bit dark (it wuold be a good idea to change it on every rendering, you wont have that repeating CG look). Grass is like carpet too green and too flat. Don't give up. Try RedBull:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chiquito Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 nice rendering. No pool? nice building, something on the grass on the first image on the lower left side seems dodgy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blade911 Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 along with all the comments above, arent the ppl postwork? they need shadows too. cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
popescusro Posted August 13, 2007 Author Share Posted August 13, 2007 image says exterior swimming pool...where is the pool?...guess you could address the composition a bit, I'm not really sure what the focal point is. Materials could do with a bit more work, cant really make out what each element is supposed to be. Sorry the title should be "exterior image olympic swimpool":D In my defense i could say that the client wants only exterior images, he is interested in how "good" the architect is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
popescusro Posted August 13, 2007 Author Share Posted August 13, 2007 along with all the comments above, arent the ppl postwork? they need shadows too. cheers Thank you for the reply, the ppl are just rpc and you are right they will have shadows. I will try to post the finished work on friday, because i have the deadline on that morning. Hope that i still be alive:p after another lost night Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chiquito Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 As far as the outside desing of the building, at least for me, I like it. It could be more apreciated with some different environment, but thats for the client, designer to decide. Your renderings are coming nice. Sahe what you have come up with, good luck with your deadline! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andy Park Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 Looks great. Grass could do with a better material, I've started using hair/fur seems to do the trick. avoid displacement unless your machine is beefy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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