Small Dining Room

[Andy Park]

Something for my wife,

 

She's doing an interior design course and she needed to design an art nouveau room. she picked all the decor.

 

All the furniture actually exists.

 

c&c welcome

[NOOXY]

interesting scene..a few things I picked up though..

 

The pink highlights seems to put off the natural color balance in the scene.

 

The chair seats look to solid and reflective..should be a softer fabricated texture.

 

The windows look like textures and not acctual models, it would be nice to see the outside of the scene..

 

just a few thoughts but coming along nicely:cool:

[Andy Park]

interesting scene..a few things I picked up though..

 

The pink highlights seems to put off the natural color balance in the scene.

 

The chair seats look to solid and reflective..should be a softer fabricated texture.

 

The windows look like textures and not acctual models, it would be nice to see the outside of the scene..

 

just a few thoughts but coming along nicely:cool:

interesting thoughts.

 

The chairs are solid no material on them (not my design)

 

The windows are geometry no textured.

 

I'll take up the pink highlights with the wife LOL.

 

Thanks.

[JamesTaylor]

you need to show some exterior... its crying out for it.

 

something just doesn't seem right here to me, you have some really nice soft, natural lighting and textures on the wall, the ceiling light and net curtains.

 

However, the furniture area of the image seems much harsher, less atmospheric. The chairs to the left are lacking contact shadows, the rug seems very staturated, un-naturally so, as does the wood which perhaps is too reflective and shiny and i'm finding it difficult to undcerstand the floor texture. Is it way oversized??? left hand edge, there is a change of colour as if its striped...

 

Finally, the window being reflected on the floor to right of the table looks as if its the window at the end of the table, its orientated wrongly for it to be the window above it and also shows mullions and transoms which aren't present.

 

I think you have the makings of a really nice image, but something isn't sitting correctly at the moment