Dabbsy Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 Hi guys What do you think??? How can I improve this, I am pretty new to visualisation. I have produced this image and was wondering how i can take it to the next level. Any constructive critique will be greatly appreciated, Cheers Dabbsy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAWUK Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 Hi Dabbsy Coming on from the earlier image. Just a couple of points The saturation of your people is off compared to the rest of the rendering and their shadows look to harsh. The path could do with a different texture looks too light and flat for it to be layed by a local council From a personal point of view I think the street party to the fore ground traps your gaze to the front of the image and not at the true focal point the building. The right of the image looks to much in shadow. Have you tried putting some light in the reception to draw the eye and give it more life. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 Hi Andrew, if you're wondering, i just deleted your new thread as it was exactly the same as this one, and in the wrong directory. once only will do pls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fadi3d Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 hello everybodi this is my first post i hope u like it.and i hope it will upload cause it seems i have trouble posting. anyway i would love to hear ur comments take care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 Fadi - how about make your own post up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fadi3d Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 I Am Sorry what Do u Mran Pls Explain How ? Thank u in advance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 you hit NEW THREAD instead of POST REPLY. this will let you make you own thread instead of hijacking somebody else's aint rocket science you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fadi3d Posted August 23, 2007 Share Posted August 23, 2007 i think i got it . thxs it sure ain't rocket sience it's just that my internet connection is soooo slowww but i think the last one i posted worked i hope u check it.anyway thanks very much and sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RodT Posted August 23, 2007 Share Posted August 23, 2007 even in the day I'd expect that there would be interior lights on at a commercial building and you'd be able to see the inside, the scale of the red car on the left seems a bit large? The male character with the bag looks quite large as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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