NOOXY Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 Hey guys a quick render and composition I put together. Model was an archmodel cg house but wanted to work on compostion, lighting and textures...ur thought for improvement:cool: rendered in C4d 10, post effects in photoshop cs2... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koper Posted August 22, 2007 Share Posted August 22, 2007 its good but I feel boxed in (composition wise), you either need to crop it more or show the top of the house and not the bottom. the aspect ratio also don't work for me, in this case I feel a vertical (portrait) aspect ration will work having more grass in the foreground, middle ground being the front of the house and the background the back, and with dof only the middle ground being in focus, but only a little bit of dof on the back part of the house and the most on the grass. Have you tried the placing the sun on the left so that you light up the main part of the house instead of the side? coool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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