patryk44 Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 Hello, I read a lot of threads here but never had a chance to post something. Usually you can find my on www.vizdepot.com .This is my first post here and my first animation ever done on one pc only. Critics and comments welcome. http://www.patryk3d.com/animations/anim.mov (I would right click and "save target as" because it slows down if you play it directly) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louis.cho Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 The concept intro is very great(except the electricity pass and the butterfly that i found a little cheezy!) but nothing to get mad! I lovehte style of the postprod /compositing. Do you use combustion? I think you can close up a little the camera. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patryk44 Posted August 24, 2007 Author Share Posted August 24, 2007 Thanks, except the electricity pass and the butterfly that i found a little cheezy I wasn't sure about these two either. I decided to show butterfly to make it look more dynamic, because for that couple of sec. it is just still of the house and there is no movement in the scene. I would love to animate the leaves on the trees (instead the butterfly), especially when the car drives by. Maybe I will get into it in the future. I will also have to figure something out to replace the electricity pass. Thanks for comments. EDIT: I used After Effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 Very Very nice...I also agree about the butterfly and electricity, but also the Geese and the really long period of darkness, maybe you could speed that process up, but great concept and a really great execution... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patryk44 Posted August 25, 2007 Author Share Posted August 25, 2007 Thanks !! I updated the animation. The link remains the same. I have changed electricity to something slight different, like light streaks. Not a 100% happy but I think looks a bit better. I have also removed the butterfly and added some birds, which definitely looks better, and scaled down the geese. That is it for now. I'm a little bit tired of working on it. Need some brake . Thanks again for comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAWUK Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 Working late so checked out your video in one of those must dope myself up with coffee moments.........loved it...the video, not the coffee. How long has it taken you to put it together so far. Keep it up....after your break that is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patryk44 Posted August 26, 2007 Author Share Posted August 26, 2007 Working late so checked out your video in one of those must dope myself up with coffee moments.........loved it...the video, not the coffee. I know what you are talking about How long has it taken you to put it together so far It is hard to tell as I did it on my free time after work. I started about 2 months ago, but meanwhile I did couple of side jobs, took a short vacation, and I didn't have a time to work on it every day after work. Thanks for comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Smith Posted August 26, 2007 Share Posted August 26, 2007 very nice and entertaining to watch...great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patryk44 Posted August 29, 2007 Author Share Posted August 29, 2007 Thanks Brian! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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