House

[Dei]

Hi! This is my first post, im posting this house i've made with 3D Studio And render With Vray, later i will add some vegetation to it but i will really like if you can give me advices on how to improve my work...

Thanks!

 

 

[PAWUK]

Hi

 

First off the grass needs changing and the path looks odd floating ontop of the grass. try and get some reflections into the glass.

 

Oh yeh ....Avalanche ....sorry but the it looks like all your hard work is about to be buried under several metres of snow.

 

If your using vray have you tried the following site , it has about 1000 free vray materials, Iam sure they have grass. http://www.vray-materials.de/all_materials.php

 

After all that its looking good, but you might want to up the quality of the next image your post as its looking abit blured in parts this end.

[Dei]

Thanks for the advices!

Ok...I've got some reflection on the windows, change the Background for fear to the avalanche =p

And of course improvement on the grass have been made, i'm not using vray Displacement or vray fur for the grass instead i used vray proxy, since the other two metods took me to long to Render.

I'm planning on add vegetation, and make a better path...

Any more ideas?

Thank for the advices pawuk!

 

[RodT]

you may want to consider your deck. A band board around the paremeter rather than the very large planks. The shutters on the end seem a bit flat. How deep is the building? Using the door as a scale object it would appear it is only about 20 feet or so?I like the brick on the front, but if it is brick on the inside of the porch it seems to have lost it. I think a bit of noise on your stucco would help a bit as well.... The grass is looking much better.

[Dei]

ok..

quick update

I've pull out the the shutters a little, improve the grass, the path and the porch floor, i dont know what you mean by "stucco", maybe a consequence of my bad english =S , do you mean aply noise to the walls?

The bricks on the proch are lost, i dont know how to make them visible, could it be a Vray configuration problem? The texture seems to be fine when i see it in the viewport, but when i render it i get that blury effect...

Thanks!

 

[PAWUK]

looking alot better, heres a link describing stucco its a material applied to the outside of a building which is an uneven surface with dents and rises stucohttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stucco also look in help in max

 

Were the sky and land meet you may want to look at as in real life you wouldnt get this sort of low down strait line 'join'

 

On the blured brick have you used a uvw map to align the bricks

 

 

Must go the wife is nagging me to get to work

[Dei]

yes im using uvw map for align the bricks, could it be the problem? how can i fix it?

Thanks!

[RodT]

Hi David,

Try this tutorial: http://www.3d-resources.com/3d_studio_max_tutorials/house_texturing_tutorial.html it might give you some insight.

[Dei]

Hi! Ok i have change a little this house, didnt have the time to fix some issues like the bricks on the porch, but still i think its quite well...I have posted my new interior just to hear some opinions here is the link to my new thread...thank you for all your advices!!!

 

 

My new interior...

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/vb/26764-my-new-interior.html