blowback Posted October 27, 2007 Share Posted October 27, 2007 Here is a small condo that I have to finish for monday. It's alright......but thats the problem it's feel just alright. I don't know what it is and I have been looking at it to long. If you have any cc please let me know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest nazcaLine Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 looks very good to me, but since you want crits here we go: -that tree at the very far left looks very low-poly, and their leaves are huge(and it's too close to the building). -it seems the bump map of the "stone" in the facade is huge also, just size it down. -hmmm..the brick...it's ok, but maybe it'd look much better a bit smaller. -personal tase: stretch the clouds a bit to fit the perspective better. -and some people, of course...kids, families, guys in bikes, i don't know my 2 cents Eduardo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Mottle Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 I'd also reduce the size of the bump on the side of the building. Cheers, Jeff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 Lookin good. I would square up the camera to the building and it looks like the building is floating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yorik Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 This is a very good image... I think about the same as previous posts, and I would maybe try to put some more stuff on the ground (small plants, grasses, etc...) to reduce the effect of having the building sitting on a flat grass plane. If you have alpha images of people, they can also help "furnishing" the ground... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 adding... The lower balcony glass is dark while the rest is light. i know why it looks that way, I also believe it looks wrong. And how do you enter this building? That should be obvious and its not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blowback Posted October 29, 2007 Author Share Posted October 29, 2007 Thanks for the comments. Here are some adjustments. I will add some site extras tomorrow The client approved this angle so I cannot change the camera drastically. As for the entrance I agree. Needs some love but the architect is happy so... I will post the final in the finished work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gods418 Posted October 29, 2007 Share Posted October 29, 2007 maybe put some people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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