Devin Johnston Posted November 16, 2007 Share Posted November 16, 2007 This isn't the first time I've done a night rendering but like most people I'm always looking for ways to make my renderings better and I really want to make this one spectacular. I'm really just looking for good constructive comments that will make the image better so please feel free to go to town. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blowback Posted November 16, 2007 Share Posted November 16, 2007 If you have the time. -Site lights and some landscaping. (maybe a big tree or sculpture garden to the left. Hide that "ugly parkade";) -Cars coming and going to the right. -light up the main floor and populate. -put some people and office furniture in the tower. I think you are off to a really good start. I really like the lighting in the office Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Cassil Posted November 16, 2007 Share Posted November 16, 2007 I assume this isn't done from your end yet because there are the obvious missing elements such as landscaping, cars, people, etc. Some things that might not be quite so obvious that I would consider are adding a few buildings behind the camera to add some interest in the reflection. Add as much to the interior as you feel you can afford but the musts are grid lighting on the ceiling and some partition walls. Other things to consider would be a few people and some simple furniture. I am against parralax in an image like this but I know not everyone will agree with that. I would also leave just a little more room at the top of the building to the top of the frame. Some subtle lighting inside the parking strutcture might be nice. And perhaps some subtle blurry reflection on the roads. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devin Johnston Posted November 16, 2007 Author Share Posted November 16, 2007 These are some good suggestions, you were right Brian I just hadn't not put in trees, cars, people yet. I'll work on these things today and update the image when I feel like I've got enough done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claudio Branch Posted November 16, 2007 Share Posted November 16, 2007 Don't forget to add a flock of birds in the sky... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devin Johnston Posted November 16, 2007 Author Share Posted November 16, 2007 Here's an update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anindia Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Beautiful image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Nice image and lighting. There is a scale issue with your truck and or cars, the motion blur looks overdone as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devin Johnston Posted November 19, 2007 Author Share Posted November 19, 2007 The truck and cars are the correct scale but the motion blur may be a bit to much I'll adjust that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sawyer Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 Personally I don't think the motion blur is overdone but I think the cars should have their lights on. Maybe only the one mblur car and move it back so its not in front of the building entrance. I would agree with Brian that the parallax could be corrected. I like the image - it seems a little isolated maybe its just me but I sense a loneliness with this image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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