jinsley Posted November 21, 2007 Share Posted November 21, 2007 I realize now that my previous question asking for help with MR exterior glazing was really lazy of me... sorry! Anyways, I didn't have much time for this project but this is the finished(minus the railings which I am still working on...) tower render I will be submitting by the end of the week. Just wanted to get some feedback. Crits and comments would be most welcome! I'm not too sure of the "ghosty" people... Thx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted November 22, 2007 Share Posted November 22, 2007 James, The things that jump out at me about this render are: Sky, if your going stylized, follow thru in the whole composition. Badly comped/masked trees. Non-corrected verticles. People, if your going to populate the scene, put in plenty. Just looks kinda unfinished. Needs the seperate components pulling together somehow. Looks like you looked at several renders you liked and pulled the bits you liked about each one into a single image (NPR sky, ghosted people, greyed out foreground, p/shop trees). Needs cohesion. But its a good start! You've got a nice building to play with. Try a more human camera angle. Hope that helps, Tom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinsley Posted November 22, 2007 Author Share Posted November 22, 2007 Thx for the crit. I agree with you on all points... I know I still have a lot more work to do... I will repost with the finished verticals and railings tomorrow... I have to draft and render on the same machine so it takes a while... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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