Office building concept

[RodT]

I've been trying to settle some saturation issues. New monitor/graphics card on the way. I was hoping for some C&C on this. Max 9 Vray 1.5. Thanks in advance for your eyes.

[BrianKitts]

Theres something very unsettling about the scale of objects in the scene. I'm not sure if it's the scale of the water ripples, or the cars, but the whole scene just feels un-natural. It could be the perspective, the front of the building and additionally the building to the left appear to be leaning.

 

Additionally I would remove the blue color from the water, it looks like it's full of blue chemicals, a natural pond would have more of a blackish/brown color.

 

edit: the more I look at it, the whole camera is rotated, but since the right edge is parrallel to the side of the image.... it looks like a perspective problem as opposed to the camera being rolled....

 

a little of pulling and stretching in Photoshop could straighten it out.... and the scale doesn't bother me as much any more..... but you'd be better off to fix the camera in the scene.

[RodT]

I do plan on additional camera angles. The blue in the water is prob right, monitor is displaying poorly and i'll make color changes soon. I think there may be an illusion being caused by the sidewalk as well...

Thanks for the look see.

[RodT]

You nailed it. The camera was rotated!