apartment interior

[alias_marks]

Hey all! hope everything is going well. Looking to get some fresh eyeballs on this one. Been starring at it for a while and would appreciate any comments/feedback you may have.

 

[Zeilveen]

Hi Michael, this looks great man, im just curious, my brain told me that it looked like two images stiched together.. I guess the mirror cuts the image in half being this long, also I think your colours are very different left and right, maybe take some of the brown from left into the right side or kill the green sofa and use a beige color, im looking for more ballance between the left and right. Great picture already there, no doubt.

 

Ronald

[Joseph Petrino]

Great image.

 

The materials on the kettle and other accessories needs work.

[alias_marks]

agreed 100% on the comments, appreciate the feedback.

 

It's actually 1 rendered image using the camera clip to get more in the frame. It's really an impossible shot to take if it were a real. I've included a before shot of the apartment and another angle (still with some definite mods to be made)

 

 

 

I did get a lot of comments at work here about the image being "cut in half." I think this really shows the value of the rule of thirds. Just couldn't get a dang angle to work and show everything we needed to:(

 

Thanks again for the comments. Take Care,

 

M-

[Zeilveen]

yes, i can see the problem with the camera angle, must be hard with those tiny spaces, you can always cut the building open and make a nice section wit a cropped camera, just a thought,

 

very nice render and that leather looks sooo real, its almost if you are taking a snapshot and we can see the flash,

 

cheers

Ronald

[3dSol]

the electric orange decoration piece on the wall is too intense and it becomes distracting to me so it weakens the image that is very promising

 

good luck!