theater WIP

[nelpiper]

Hi guys. I followed the advice of STRAT and tried to fix those issues. This new rendering has no AA, nothing. Thanks for watching and always every critic is welcome. Thanks for watching.

[schmoron13]

much improved but there are still some issues:

 

* the viewing angle. It looks like the camera is on level with the door, but there's a large staircase in front, so in essence, the viewer feels like he or she is floating

 

* the weird Depth of field on the side elevation which is blurring the bricks is distracting.

 

* scale issues. The size of the singles on the roof look to be (compared to the door) a couple of feet each in diameter which is way way way too big. Also, the grass is displaced too large. The stonework is pushing on being too big. For a house, you would find smaller scaled stones to not overwhelm the scale of the house and create a gingerbread-house feel.

 

*The AA is still an issue on the windows.

 

all that aside, you're getting there...

[nelpiper]

Hi guys. I followed critics and a new render is there. Thanks again for all critics and keep doing them because their are priceless for me please. Thanks for watching.