conjeo Posted January 3, 2008 Share Posted January 3, 2008 Here is my rendering for Pahlisch Homes of their new community center with pool. Let me know what you think. I am eager to see what other professionals think. This is my 1st post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy Burns Posted January 4, 2008 Share Posted January 4, 2008 Very good work for first post Only thing that I noticed is that the shadow of the bag is on the wrong side need to mirror this shadow Really like it though the people match really well too Well done!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claudio Branch Posted January 4, 2008 Share Posted January 4, 2008 Nice work so far. A couple of comments: I think you need to play with the composition. The foreground of your image is dominated by concrete and the standing figure. You might want to put more focus on the center and pool. I find the near figure too distracting. The textures on your steps leading to the center need attention. They are glaring white areas. Your primary light souce is hitting them too directly. It would probably be effective to raise the angle of your sun a bit anyway. You have very long shadows and hotspots - this doesn't jive. I think you have done an excellent job on the interior of the center...I want to see more, but I find myself staring at the girl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy Burns Posted January 4, 2008 Share Posted January 4, 2008 Don't we all ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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