miguelafi Posted January 11, 2008 Share Posted January 11, 2008 Hi, its been a long time since my last thread, so as always im looking for critiques and some useful feedback before sending the image to my client. this is a roof terrace for a building in Puerto Vallarta, its max 8.0 and vray. thanks in advance for the replys and comments... Muchas gracias, Saludos a todos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koper Posted January 11, 2008 Share Posted January 11, 2008 very cool, when can i go visit, thats a place where i can go and relax. very nice image! how 'bout some fruit in the bowl on the table? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miguelafi Posted January 16, 2008 Author Share Posted January 16, 2008 nobody has nothing to say.... i was expecting a little more interest, anyway thanks aa lot koper for your reply i totally agree that some fruit will make the image richer.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eric Sosa Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 nice render ...love puerto vallarta btw fast critic - plants colour make's it looks fake - the sun ligth is "just" above the parasol ...get it much higher - new houses do not "that new"..fix wall textures - make a bigger render to see detalies saludos...Eric Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miguelafi Posted January 17, 2008 Author Share Posted January 17, 2008 HOLA Eric Thanks a lot for your comments, im not sure i fully understand you in 2 things.. "the sun ligth is "just" above the parasol ...get it much higher" what do you mean with parasol??? and "new houses do not "that new"..fix wall textures" what do you feel about the textures??? i dont fully understand this comment thank you very much i really want to understand what u say so i can fix it... thanks a lot.. MUCHAS GRACIAS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eric Sosa Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 hey miguel. sorry...typping too fast and using danish words . - u'r vray sun is placed just above the sunshader (don't remember how it is called in spanish), in fact just over your terrace so the sunshader shadow looks odd. get it much higher up, above the terrace. -new houses do not "look" that new. wall texture looks "too new" the rest u can understand..rigth? still, make a bigger render to help us to make more precise comments saludos....Eric btw; lets keep it in English...my spanish is geeting rotten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kstruve Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 Miguel, Your rendering is quite nice. It has a good feel to it. I particularly like that our viewpoint is under the trellis in partial shade. I don't agree with Eric that your sun angle should be higher. I like how the umbrella/parasol/sun-shader shadow breaks up the floor area. I agree that the stucco texture needs some work. Maybe sharper edges and smaller scale would do the trick. Or maybe try a hand-troweled finish. I would like to see a person relaxing under the trellis in the foreground, perhaps sipping a margarita! Looking very good! Kurt Struve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanashimi Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 its beautiful. a little more clutter and dirt and imperfections and it would be perfect i agree with the wall being too "new" all in all, excellent work! can you share your settings? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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