living room

[nelpiper]

Hi guys. This is my recent project. This is just a render to show you guys what you think the modeling. Still got a lot of noise. Critics are very welcome. Thanks for watching.

[Ricardo Eloy]

Hi, Nelson!

Modeling looks OK, a bit too cartoonish for my taste, though. The proportions seem odd, especially the lamps.

I would coment on the total lack of shadows, but I guess you are still working on that.

Keep going.

[nelpiper]

Hi folks. That's a recent rendering. I included a vray sun and a vray light at the window. Still not finished but I would appreciate more critics. Thanks for watching.

[RodT]

The shadows are giving the image a lot better depth. I'd say that the coffee table and table lamps are really to large for the space.

[gurudas_ku]

hi

image looks good, i think u used vray as render engine, a slight touch up is needed increase shadows and brightness and reduce the size of the furniture

[miguelafi]

hi, i think u really need to fix the deep of your sofas, the pillows looks good but there is no place to sit and that also looks a little rare, the lamps are lacking of deep maybe adding some ies lights inside them would help you, and the frame in the back of the couch look very flat add some deep to it and an glass with some reflection to make it look better.

 

Try adding some fabric texture to your courtains they look fake.

 

i think youre in the right track....

good luck

[blowback]

nice call miguelafi, ies would rock it out! good start! the furniture is a little big. What's up with the fireplace? needs a little love and more art on the walls.