car showroom

[kippu]

any comments on this project of mine to make it better ... i have blurred the name on the board to obscure it

 

[Eric Sosa]

fast critic:

 

very nice background colour vs the render, good start

 

- render is too small to be viewed propertly

- almost imposible to see textures

- logos ougth to have their own luminosity and the rigth bitmaps (file size)

- looks like the rooms where the cars are is too yellow and intense (can't hardly see what is behind)

 

Eric

[Justin Hunt]

Light up the exterior show floor.

 

Only thing really bugging me is the design. Having done several beemer showrooms and alot of retail in the past one thing is common, the cars must be highly visible. The columns block out far too much of the view into the building. I cant see the cars. You dont have control over the design but if you swung around to the left the coloumns have less impact and you'd see more of the cars.

 

Also try get a bit more sparkle to the interior lighting. As much as i hate lens flares a bit of Boken effect would really make this sing.

 

JHV

[kippu]

thanks justin... will try out what you said