office complex

[blowback]

Here is the updated rendering with Shane, Tom, Joel, Eric, and Brians help.

 

THX

[fourthand11]

The glass needs some sky reflection. There should be some blue in there.

[Tommy L]

The backgrund still doesnt work for me. Its the wrong scale, makes it looks like a Thunderbirds shot.

[blowback]

Thunderbirds eh? me 2. no time to change it. I will concider for next time. What makes it thunderbird in your opinion?

[Horhe]

The backgrund still doesnt work for me. Its the wrong scale, makes it looks like a Thunderbirds shot.

 

Im with Tommy on this one. Seems like it was done from a frist persone perspective - average person height thus the horizon line should be at eye level and not as you have in this case - more of an aerial bird view shot.

As for the scale - it should be about 15/20 times smaller - those desert shrubs are definetaly smaller.

Definetaly looking much bettter as I remember this project from back ago when you were at the first stages of developing the image.

Some trees look alike - need variaton. As for the reflection I agree there could be some more. Nice progess.

[blowback]

Thanks for all your crits. I see what you are saying. Poor scale in bg trees. Lack of middle or foreground detail, and out of control lighting.

 

I kinda gave up on this. Sometimes its not your drawing, or should I say, you let the other "artists" take over. Get fed up, and want it out of your face. Not a very good attitude. I'm workin' on it.