PACU Interior

[bwsumruld]

Here is a PACU rendering that I'm doing for the nurses so they can understand their new space. I've just noticed that the floor is tiled and i need to fix it but any other C+C would be appreciated before final push...

 

thanks,

[Horhe]

The curtains look a little stiff thus a bit CG. Even for plastic curtains the creases are too uniform. Try to pull back some curves a little, and bring others closer together. Ive attached a photo to illustrate what I mean. I being probably too picky though but there isnt much more that I can criticise and I certainly cant let you off the hook that easily . Joking.

 

Looks nice.

 

It would really liven things if you could insert a nurse sitting at the desk.

[Crazy Homeless Guy]

well, it will effectively communicate the space, but i assume you are looking for advice to add realism?

 

.....for starters, i would lower the camera to eye level. it looks high.

 

i also think the lighting is to uniform. ...not enough light -vs- dark areas. you need more contrast in the shadows, and a few harder specular reflections.

[bwsumruld]

Horthe thanks for the crits and i agree that the curtains do look a little too uniform and i will try and work on them. Again thanks,

 

CHG, thanks for your crits as well. I do agree that there needs to be more contrast and i think that would help the area become more alive. I know that my camera seems a little high for the space however the camera is actually at 5'8" this is an existing bldg that is getting renovated so we have a very limited space to work in so that is why it is probably looking a little too high. However, i think i might bring the camera down just a bit to see if it will help the image more.

 

Again thanks for all the crits and i will repost with the results...

 

thanks,

[bwsumruld]

Here is the latest renderings. C+C?

 

thanks again,

[Horhe]

Curtains look better.

I usually do agree with camera being at a lower angle - but not in this case. The previous shot was better.

[blowback]

I agree with travis....you need to give it a little more mood with the lighting. Don't go crazy on lowering the camera to the ground....just a bit. Ther rest looks good. Dude.

[fourthand11]

Would it look nice to work on the lighting inside the actual nurses station? This would bring the viewers eye into that space and set a focus. You can always work the lighting in the surrounding areas in PS.