sdavrella Posted March 10, 2008 Share Posted March 10, 2008 This is more an ilumination study. I wanted to give it a "late in the afternoon" mood, and as photografic looking as possible. It will be part of my portfolio that I need to present this week, so it's kind of a big deal to me... Any critics and ideas on how to improve this image, please be welcome! C4D+vray PS. The base of this image was inspired by the following image (not meant to be the same): http://www.cgarchitect.com/gallery/image_spotlight.asp?galleryID=44036 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdavrella Posted March 11, 2008 Author Share Posted March 11, 2008 Anyone?! I really do need some help... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kailyon Posted March 11, 2008 Share Posted March 11, 2008 great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bonciutoma Posted March 11, 2008 Share Posted March 11, 2008 Hi there, I have two comments about your image: 1. I would like to make a sugestion about the proportions of the objects in the scenes. The two couches seem too small for an adult compared with the two chairs in the background (or everything else it's a little to big) 2.The image presents an overall noise in the materials (could be becouse of the bump beeing to antialias or maybe a general pattern that has a small noise or maybe some quality settings). Overall good job with these two comments from me. Good luck in your presentation ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fourthand11 Posted March 12, 2008 Share Posted March 12, 2008 the sitting area seems lonely, and creates this empty foreground space. focus a little more on the composition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdavrella Posted March 12, 2008 Author Share Posted March 12, 2008 OK, I am making the suggested changes and will post the image soon! Thank you guys!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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