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Atrium - Something's missing..


satishjogi
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Hi everyone!

 

Here i am working on this image, been 2 days now im playing around, and i know something's missing, just dont know what more to do... See if u can help me, please :)

 

Its vray sun im using with hsv exp... and those green coloured walls will be photoshop-ed with grass later...

 

Cheers

 

Hi again!

thanks andy and zsolt, I worked a little on ur comment, and the updated image is on the right.

Cheers

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The plants in the centre front are really not doing it for me. They seem to be throwing the whole scale / perspective off somehow.

 

Some of the people are badly aligned and their saturation do not match the scene.

 

The lights on the right, are they adding to the scene lighting at all, or are they there for show? Its a bright sunny atrium, and no lights would really be glowing that intensely. I would ditch what looks like a self illuminating material.

 

Good start though, has a sort of abstract feel to it almost.. Not sure if thats intentional....;)

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