poor settings

[Sawyer]

I have threatened to do this for a few years. Its not a tutorial its a reference image. Its a W.I.P. it may never be complete there are more images that go with this but I would like a bit of feedback and I am wondering if there are other typical settings that get set off.

 

I don't even know if this is helpful.

 

It may just go on my website as another word doc like the LWF one I did a while back. (You see I know nothing about web design.)

 

edit added larger image