muchhal.sandeep@gmail.com Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 Hi all, This is a view of a residence which one of mine client was doing he unfortunately got it executed up to the stage its in the photograph without giving a thought on its looks. I recently completed this design and wanted your feedback so that I can improvise on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaheer Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 bravo the design is looks complete in every aspect, and the proportions are perfect. i coudn,t imagine that the elevation will turn out so good after i saw the photograph. please dont add any thing to it. i am an architect and also a new learner of visualization, your rendering skills have added to the elevation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chutti Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 why the blue walls infront of the building i would replace them with glass window openings. so that natural light can enter to lit the rooms properly. it also blocking the view....how about some reds?? godd work!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muchhal.sandeep@gmail.com Posted March 24, 2008 Author Share Posted March 24, 2008 Thanks zaheer for the appreciation, Hi Chutti here in india thr is a concept of vastu basically originated from mythological point although it is purely climatology but it is really difficult to explain it to client that it is climatology they simply want to copy the instructions from vastu books which actually do not allow windows in that direction. although it is hopeless but we have to adjust to clients there were somee openings but he changed them and made blank walls as i have shown in the pic even i too would like to have some openings thr i will again give a talk to the client. regarding the color i will rework on it. thanks for your sugession. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blade911 Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 yeah working on the colors will definitely help and couple more things tat u can fix - add a texture to ur ashpalt - ur window on the first floor needs to be reflecting part of the building as well - wat is the purpose of the open space at the entrance? is it a car park? it looks like one in ur render but it looks more like a closed space in the construction pic. jus wonderin cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muchhal.sandeep@gmail.com Posted March 25, 2008 Author Share Posted March 25, 2008 Hi Kripal The open space is actually a car park which I will also have to close in the rendering. The glass is basically phoped so i dont have the building reflection in it. so I will correct it. I m currently working on colors. will comeback after completion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muchhal.sandeep@gmail.com Posted March 25, 2008 Author Share Posted March 25, 2008 Hi all, I have made some modifications in the massing of the structure so posting the updated image, C&C welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blade911 Posted March 26, 2008 Share Posted March 26, 2008 diff style looks interestin but looks slightly gloomy, also isnt tat slope a bit too short n steep. i wouldn wanna take my lamborghini up thr . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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