Exterior renderings

[Swapnil Deshmukh]

hi there,

This is my first post.

tried to make it real.

c & c are welcome:)

[tanni]

nice job! good lighting.

Please check light lick at car porch, scale of the tree. Footpath are glossy?

[Matt Clementson]

On the whole a good job. The obvious thing that stands out for me is that the map on the shoulder of the road had obvious tiling and looks too large.

[kippu]

work on the trees and the points mentioned above and that will be a good image

[amer abidi]

Because of the geometry of the buildings, i would predict a much more interesting shot if the sun was hitting the structures from a noonish angle so as to show all the interesting shadows on the buildings' facades.

[Swapnil Deshmukh]

Thanks for comments

 

1st

Tanni: I worked hard to get rid of that glow, donno why may be the dark multiplier was too much than the bright multiplier. still i will work on it

Kippu: Thanks for the comments

Matt: Yup,thanx, I will make it less prominent

amer: I splitted the sun setting from the sky settings. I like more of a rainy atmosphere in shadows area & white sky as if there is more pollution. thats why the footpath is matte shiny, coz i wanted that effect. still, I will post a better image later., thanks:D

[Donor]

If it's a rainy/just past rainy look you're going for, the road could use some puddles or a similar glossy reflectiveness of the sidewalk. Perhaps in post, some darkening of the upper portions of the walls that caught some of the rain too maybe? The lighting solution is realitic, for sure, but I agree with there being a different solution that would bring some shadow play into the image too. Looks awesome!

[amer abidi]

Oh ok i see the sidewalk effect now..but i strongly agree with Greg's comments about the puddles..and a different lighting solution =)

[sudark]

well, since the shadow on the road looks like there is some soft direct light, maybe some soft direct lighting on the buildings would help bring out the details and add some contrast as well

[Swapnil Deshmukh]

ok, I will post a better image in few days.

Thanx